what did you guys think?

So for whoever came to the comicon and read (or flicked through) my comic book, what did you guys think? Be as honest as you wish, please, I need feedback to continue it.

Now keep this in mind, first of all its meant to be in colour, and second, it was only the first part of the story, there are going to be more instalments to finish the story

And secondly, what did you think of my art work at comicon? Should I have chosen different ones?